fix: revise words on docs intro page #9588
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would really like these to use logos of the companies to make them feel more user story-ish.
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I can handle this in a separate PR 👍🏻
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| 3. A customizable admin dashboard for merchants to configure and operate their store. | ||
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| With these tools, you save time you would spend with other platforms on maintaining and setting up your customizations. Instead, you rapidly build important features for your business. | ||
| When you start Medusa the first time you get a fully fledged commerce platform with all the features you need to get off the ground. But unlike other platforms, Medusa is built with customization in mind. This avoids the need to build hacky workarounds that are difficult to maintain and scale, and instead allows you to focus on building features that move the needle. |
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| When you start Medusa the first time you get a fully fledged commerce platform with all the features you need to get off the ground. But unlike other platforms, Medusa is built with customization in mind. This avoids the need to build hacky workarounds that are difficult to maintain and scale, and instead allows you to focus on building features that move the needle. | |
| When you start Medusa the first time you get a fully fledged commerce platform with all the features you need to get off the ground. | |
| But, unlike other platforms, Medusa is built with customization in mind. You don't need to build hacky workarounds that are difficult to maintain and scale. Instead, you can focus on building features that move the needle. |
Not a fan of " you can focus on building features that move the needle." as it feels vague. What do you think of something like " you can focus on building features that brings your business's vision to life"?
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| ## Who should use Medusa | ||
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| Medusa is for ambitious businesses and developers that are limited by traditional ecommerce solutions: | ||
| Medusa is for businesses that have unique requirements that other digital commerce platforms can't easily support. Businesses of any size can use Medusa, from small startups to large enterprises - all it takes is a developer who can run a few commands and deploy your project. |
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| Medusa is for businesses that have unique requirements that other digital commerce platforms can't easily support. Businesses of any size can use Medusa, from small startups to large enterprises - all it takes is a developer who can run a few commands and deploy your project. | |
| Medusa is for businesses with unique requirements that other digital commerce platforms can't easily support. Businesses of any size can use Medusa, from small startups to large enterprises - all it takes is a developer to manage and deploy your project. |
"a developer who can run a few commands" feels somewhat demeaning 😅
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I can handle this in a separate PR 👍🏻
Co-authored-by: Shahed Nasser <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Shahed Nasser <[email protected]>
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@shahednasser - can I ask you to take over on this PR. Feel free to adjust wording as you see fit |
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