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Author: shahednasser

www/apps/book/app/learn/page.mdx

@@ -16,7 +16,9 @@ Medusa ships with three main tools:
 2. A framework to build custom functionalities specific to your business, product, or industry. This includes tools for introducing custom API endpoints, business logic, and data models; building workflows and automations; and integrating with third-party services.
 3. A customizable admin dashboard for merchants to configure and operate their store.
 
-When you start Medusa the first time you get a fully fledged commerce platform with all the features you need to get off the ground. But unlike other platforms, Medusa is built with customization in mind. This avoids the need to build hacky workarounds that are difficult to maintain and scale, and instead allows you to focus on building features that move the needle.
+When you start Medusa the first time you get a fully fledged commerce platform with all the features you need to get off the ground.
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+However, unlike other platforms, Medusa is built with customization in mind. You don't need to build hacky workarounds that are difficult to maintain and scale. Instead, you can focus on building features that brings your business's vision to life.
 
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@@ -47,7 +49,7 @@ npx create-medusa-app@rc
 
 ## Who should use Medusa
 
-Medusa is for businesses that have unique requirements that other digital commerce platforms can't easily support. Businesses of any size can use Medusa, from small startups to large enterprises - all it takes is a developer who can run a few commands and deploy your project.
+Medusa is for businesses with unique requirements that other digital commerce platforms can't easily support. Businesses of any size can use Medusa, from small startups to large enterprises - all it takes is a developer to manage and deploy your project.
 
 Below are some stories from companies that use Medusa: